I know it's hard, but you've got to do it, bear it patiently.
-reshuffle again, if you can't bear it, then start quoting secondary materials, and try to rephrase it
-Parts about Harxxx, land reclamation, not-yet (Blxxx), and m. narrative (for the revolting part)
-After the reshuffle, if it comes out okay, then print it out that day
-check out books, and call it a day.
Good Luck !
post remark: I'd better get the draft done before Tuesday, so I can discuss it with Emxxxx.
-reshuffle again, if you can't bear it, then start quoting secondary materials, and try to rephrase it
-Parts about Harxxx, land reclamation, not-yet (Blxxx), and m. narrative (for the revolting part)
-After the reshuffle, if it comes out okay, then print it out that day
-check out books, and call it a day.
Good Luck !
post remark: I'd better get the draft done before Tuesday, so I can discuss it with Emxxxx.